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Wednesday 18 September 2019

Finish the Story! (reading)

Character descriptions.
Josh is a scaredy cat because he was about to fall in the water. But I can relate.
Josh has a nice dark skin tone, with very short hair. On the 5th page, he looks scared that he would die.
The Storyteller is like this mature kind of child that doesn’t really care. And he's mean because he didn’t bother saving his best friend.
He looks asian, with black hair. He has nice white nails. And he has spiky long hair.
Physical description and Personality Description.


The camp was really nice, like akawa island. It’s a really good camp. It’s nice and dark. And when the sun comes up, it’s a bright cool.
The cabin is really clean. And has a smooth dark wood wall. It has about 4 beds on the ground. 
Setting description.

Plot points: Description.
Beginning
They wake up in the cabin.
Problem Beginning
The boy was stuck and his friend wouldn’t help him.
Rising Action
They are not saving him so the thing is gonna fall.
Where has the story been left?
It has been left when josh is still stuck.
Predicted climax
Josh falling.
Predicted Ending
I think Josh would fall and then everyone will laugh at him.


 Finish off the story


Then Josh fell because the thing broke, and then everyone laughed at him. Then Josh cried and then everyone else felt really guilty. Then Josh wasn’t there friend anymore, but then they apologised and they became best friends again.
They also promised to help him when he's in need.


Task description.
Mr. Goodwin made us do a extremely confusing task. It was a really hard task. We had to do lots of things that I can't even explain. This task is like a description of the book. But it's a book without an ending.
That's it.

Labels: 2019, Pt England School, Mr. Goodwin, reading 2019.

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