Juicy Complex Sentences 2019 Part 2/2

WALT: write complex sentences.

Complex Sentence.

1. I have a little brother, his name is Robbie.

2.  He makes us laugh when he does his crazy faces.

(I have a little brother his name is Robbie he makes us laugh when he does his crazy faces. )

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1.My sister’s name is Toua.

2. I  really don’t like my sister.

(My sister is toua i don't like my sister.)

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The bottom sentences are the original writing we had to fix like
E.g: I have a little brother his name is Robbie he makes us laugh when he does his crazy faces.

If any of these doesn't make sense, please comment me and I will fix it. Even for part 1.

Task description.

Mr Goodwin and Miss Garden made a document for us. We had to make some sentences that didn't make sense make sense. We had to try and fix everything like. "alway" to "always. We have been learning to add detail from to form a juicy complex sentence.

Juicy Complex Sentences 2019 Part 1/2

WALT: write complex sentences.

Complex sentence

1. My sister is not funny, and she is not kind to me

2. She always hates it when I call her names.

(My sister is not funny she is not kind to me and she alway hates it when I call her names.)

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1. My brother and me plays rugby outside, but.

2. Sometimes he is very annoying to me.

(My brother and me plays rugby outside but some time he is very annoying to me.)

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1. He is my only brother, that I ever had.

2. He is helpful, kind and,

3.he is my favorite out of my whole family.

(He is my only brother I ever had  he is helpful, kind and he is my favorite out of my whole family .)

(We had to fix the sentences in the bottom)

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1. My Sister, Te Roimata is alright.

2. She is 14 years old.

(My Sister Te Roimata is alright she is 14 years old.)

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Task description.

Mr Goodwin and Miss Garden made a document for us. We had to make some sentences that didn't make sense make sense. We had to try and fix everything like. "alway" to "always. We have been learning to add detail from to form a juicy complex sentence.

This is only Part 1 because I didn't want to make this post really big, so there's more.