WALT: write using the structure of a narrative.
Weird dreams?
Once, This boy was dreaming. Apparently having a cool dream, but in real life. It’s a literal nightmare. He was dreaming about a doll moving by itself. Talking cute and innocent, but it’s actually a soul stealer. If the doll hugs you, your soul will vanish. Then he woke up, well in the dream. He had a dream, and another dream inside! This time it’s about everyone disappearing. Now he has to do everything by himself, but this girl breaks in while he’s dreaming. She puts her hand on his forehead and says this. “Please make this boys dream come true” she said. Then she left quietly, and quickly.
Dreams take over...
“Sam, Wake up!” Sam’s mom said. Sam woke up and looks around and a doll drops from the roof. Sam looked confused and thought he was still dreaming. He went out to the bathroom and wet his head. While he was doing that, the doll was moving. The doll stopped moving when he came back. He realised that the doll move spots and it wasn’t a dream, but he didn’t care. He just went to the kitchen to have breakfast. Then he realised his parents looked like witches. Big long nose, Warty and green. That’s the next dream. He was like oh cool! He hugged his parents and kissed them. When he went to his room, the doll moved places again. He didn’t care AGAIN. He looked in the mirror and he was turning green. He started getting warts, and had a nose nearly as long as his witch parents. He yelled “Ahhhhhhhhh”. He thought it was the doll’s fault, so he ripped the doll. It broke and went he went to his bed. He was so angry but while he was angry the doll was repairing. For some reason it looked brand new. When he saw that the doll was moving to him. Trying to hug him. Then he realised that his dream is happening in real life for some reason. Then he ran outside and saw the doll jump out the balcony. He nearly ran out of breath. Then Sam’s parents went out. Looked like a superhero. They were there favourite superheroes. Batman, they jumped of the balcony and thought they were flying, but they weren't. They just smashed there head. The doll and Sam both stared at them. Continue on, now Sam just left straight away. Then everything started to disappear, the doll, the houses, every person in the world! Even there clothes disappeared. He loved food, he can’t even survive like 30 minutes without food. He realised how to fix this. He has to wait till the day ends. If the dream is happening, he thinks it might end the next day at the morning because he wakes up.
The end?
The whole day is nearly finish. He is so excited cause he’s dying of hunger. It’s 5:59, He was waiting for just a minute. He wanted to dance like a psycho till the end, so he did. He was like a octopus swimming around. 1 minute has finish. For some reason, everything thing was black. He’s like moving at the same direction to the house. Then he like fainted.. “Sam wake up!”. He took a deep breath that it ended. He danced again, just like an octopus.
"The and.." (end)
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Task description.
Today Mr. Goodwin made us a document so we can write like Paul Jennings. We had to write crazy and funny, I tried my best. I couldn't do that much funny things with my idea (Dreams come true..). We had to choose an idea that Mr. Goodwin made or just make your own ideas like me.
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