Walt: write for a specific audience
Dear future campers,
Camp Bentzon is a big beautiful island, officially owned by Erin and Peter. You get to do so many fun activities, both land activities and water activities. Some activities can be really scary, but you still have to try and do it! Good luck at the first day, I swear that hike was tiring. Luckily, the run you do every morning at camp isn’t that long, on the plus side, you get lots of free time and yummy food!
The first tip is to bring the right shoes, because you may get hurt or get lots of cuts at the beach if you didn’t bring your water shoes! You have to bring your water shoes so you can go swimming and do the 3 water activities. You should bring running shoes because you don’t want to wear water shoes or sandals/sandals while going up Killer Hill.
The next tip is to bring enough clothes! You need enough clothes because you don't want to wear the same clothes everyday. Bring like 5 pairs of clothes because that’s how much I needed. Bring 5 pairs even though if it says to bring 3 pairs. But you don’t have to bring 5 pairs of pyjamas, you probably only need 1. Unless if you want new pyjamas every night, bring 3 pairs. You need like 5 pairs of clothes because you may have to wear the same clothes like I did.
The 3rd tip is too try and sleep. Even if you can’t sleep you have to try, you might get in trouble like we did. Even if you don’t wanna wake up, you could get changed early without making that much noise. When you're done changing, you could just relax. You have to try and sleep because you want to have a great camp and not get in trouble.
Were almost to the last tip! Well this tip is about Killer Hill. Don’t run down Killer Hill, Mr. Goodwin even said people ran down Killer Hill and hurt themselves severely bad. They’ve had several severe injuries because of that reason. Also, don’t waste your energy running up, just walk up. And don’t ever use jandals while you walk up Killer Hill!
Finally, were at the last tip. The last tip tells you to be respectful and have good manners. You have to be respectful to every Adult there, and if they ask you to do the favour, you just do it! Also you have to have PROPER manners. When you get food from an adult, you must say Thank you because it’s respectful.
Conclusion.
With these top 5 tips, you will have a great camp at this beautiful island because you will still have your feet, you wouldn’t have many injuries, not get in trouble and you would also have happy teachers because your being grateful or most because your doing the things they don’t want to do.
Task description.
Mr. Goodwin made us do a writing about our year 6 camp at Kawau Island. We had to tell tips for the future campers, also because we want them to have a great time there.
Labels: Mr. Goodwin, Point England School, 2019, Writing 2019
