Narrative Writing

This is where we got our writing task, The photo is also in the class. (It's in the Planning.) This is just is case if you don't understand





One day this spoiled kid named Nina wanted to go to the BEST arcade ever! They had to go to the airport so they can go to the best arcade which is in New Zealand. Nina ws always arguing of the plane being so slow and it’s so noisy. She was so annoyed that she said to her Dad that “YOU OWE ME MONEY!”, so spoiled. They finally arrived at New Zealand but they had to drive 10 miles to the arcade. Nina was so annoyed. Nina wanted to buy some amazing food that cost like 1 billion dollars! The dad lost LOTS of money because of that. Nina ate all the food and farted a lot in front of her dad. Her dad was so sad and the dad was sobbing, but Nina didn’t care! Nina said “ Hurry up slowpoke , let’s just go! Ugh..”. The dad was silent and they went back to there limbo.  They finally arrived and they had to park in the 10th floor because some of the parking had a time limit and some of them was filled with cars! They had walk so far down. Nina was so lazy that she just let her dad carry her. Her dad made it there. Nina was so excited. Her Dad was gonna play with her but Nina didn’t wanna waste money on him. Then Nina remembered 2 things. Nina said “GIVE ME MY MONEY!”. Her dad gave the money and Nina ran straight to the new game. She played it 10 times and she died in all of them and then she realised there was a sign on the arcade game. Its says “ DO NOT PLAY 10 TIMES, OR ELSE DANGER AHEAD”. A few minutes her dad was watching her and then she disappeared! They just realised he went in the game. The Arcade man was so shocked and realised she played it 10 times! The Arcade man said “Oh no, She got stuck in the game! She has to beat it or she dies for real!”. The dad said “NOoOoOo”.  When the game was gonna start “Nina was screaming like a baby girl “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”. Nina was crying but he saw a old man that was in the game. The Grandparent helped her beat this game. The Grandparent said “Go in my house, and grab the the Axe”. “When you have the Axe break this secret wall, Then you should find a globe. Shake the Globe and then a hint will show, It says to get a anchor and tie it to a island and then throw the anchor on the ground so it won’t float. Then it showed us to the cogwheel. We had to stick in the bottom and it started to go down. Now they just had to wait 1 HOUR.

1 hour later. And then they completed the game and Nina wasn’t a spoiled brat anymore.

The End