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Thursday, 15 February 2018

My Narrative Story!





There was People WHo was looking for TREASURE, But it took a lot time. They’re name was Aaliyah,Simon,Bradley And lastly Kauri! They All Has Pieces Of TReasure Maps, But they did not know each other Yet, Until They Saw The news, When Aaliyah With A Treasure map piece. Aaliyah said “I am Looking for map pieces If you have one and you're looking for it come to me!” So SImon came in The right place in the right time!When They all came they glued it together. So they followed it but they saw lots of rubbish, They did not care about the earth so they just went past, But they Simon said “Should We pick it up, It will be respectful” They All said “Yeah!”. They Picked it up and Threw it at the right place. But one of them Miss, SO they All just said “Let’s Just walk to the rubbish bin”. SO They were done and It was the morning already! They went there in Midnight! But in the morning They went pass SO many rubbish and they went into a creepy sticky slimy old creek that had Ducks on the water with WARTS! They got so scared so they just went out and just picked up the rubbish. They needed to sleep so luckily Aaliyah got some sleeping bags and tents! SO They slept in Midnight and they all kinda got scared because they sleeping in the creek, They thought Pennywise was gonna go and kill us. But when they were fast asleep They got nightmares! Really Bad nightmares. In the morning they all screamed like a chicken saying GHOST! They woke up together at the same time! Until that some graffiti went on the long rusty pipes. They were containers of graffiti there! But they just cared about the treasure. But they realized that the treasure was in the mountain the place they slept SO they digged and digged with a shovel and found a new place to sleep, They worked all day until they found it. Inside they were cleaning supplies and lots of money,also a note! It says “CLEAN UP THIS MESS AND CONGRATS ON FINDING IT” Bradley said “Omg we wasted time on just cleaning supplies what a rip off!”. Simon said “Aww nuts”. Aaliyah said “ WHo cares we will have to clean up the note Also says Clean And a map will secretly fall down from the heavens!”.So They had jobs Aaliyah setted it up! Simon and Bradley Will clean the graffiti, Kauri is gonna make lots of space and make it more brighter so cutting a little bit of branches also putting back the dirt where they digged and Aaliyah picked up rubbish in the water and everywhere! AFter a few months later IT was so bright and clean! The path was made of clay and it is frozen! They all said “What perfect creek”. And then the map of heavens came, They also got a million dollars! The map was leading to more money but in a secret place that no one knows on the open! So they went on another adventure! WHen they found it. They were more money inside then they expected . So They donated some money to homeless people for some food and gave them stuff like concert tickets on gift cards! ANd in the night the stars made a big smiley face. They respected the earth!

























































29 comments:

  1. Sorry That my writing is all caps. I don't know how to fix it!

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  2. Great simon :) but all the caps but it a lot and good :)

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  3. That is much and it is so so so amazing :)

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  4. Simon it is so much how can you do this! WOW :)

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